Paragraph Unit 1

Team players reach ^ goals ^ easier (wf - you need an adverb, not an adjective). They are prefered (sp) to lead hard tasks where a teamwork is necessary. They have the hability (sp) to keep co-workers motivated and focused on their company goals. Generally, the best positions in a big company are occupied by team players. Using simple skills as kindness, goodwill and sympathy, they avoid problems among their team ^ and can get the best of each one. In summary, a team player turns a hard task into a well-done job.

Dear Ivan,

Your paragraph is excellent with a well-developed flow of ideas. You also captured the reader's attention concluding your thought with an impacting sentence. Fantastic! There are just some small details to be edited. I'm sure you know the true meaning of what it takes to be a team player.

Write the second version of your text just below the first. Click on "edit" and then "save".

vt - wrong verb tense

vf - wrong verb form

sp- spelling

wf - wrong word form

^ - something missing