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Ivan

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on March 12, 2011 at 11:01:34 pm
 

 

Paragraph Unit 1

 

Team players reach ^ goals ^ easier (wf - you need an adverb, not an adjective). They are prefered (sp) to lead hard tasks where a teamwork is necessary. They have the hability (sp) to keep co-workers motivated and focused on their company goals. Generally, the best positions in a big company are occupied by team players. Using simple skills as kindness, goodwill and sympathy, they avoid problems among their team ^ and can get the best of each one. In summary, a team player turns a hard task into a well-done job.

 

 

Dear Márcia,,

 

You have structured well your paragraph, with a clear topic sentence and conclusion. You raised excellent points about tyrant friends. In fact, this is a very interesting topic. I'd like to see more supporting ideas with examples and facts to make your text even richer. Pay attention to some language structures, mainly the spelling of the words and word form.  I'm sure your paragraph will soon be a masterpiece!

 

 

Write the second version of your text just below the first. Click on "edit" and then "save".

 

vt - wrong verb tense

vf - wrong verb form

sp- spelling

wf - wrong word form

^ - something missing

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