Paragraph Unit 1

Ten years ago, I had a tyrant boss .He was a pain in the neck, annoying and offensive. (give some examples of what he did to make your life so miserable at work and how he was annoying and offensive). It was a

life–changing experience because he have showed (vf/vt) me a bad example(of what?) and I’ve decided that

I will never (vt/vf) threat (sp) ^person the same way like him (wrong expression). I was burning the candle at both ends during two long years. I haven’t (vf) time for myself, my family and friends (why?). Finally, he was moved to other (wf) office and my life turn on back (wrong expression) and I was finding (vt) a balance.

Dear Uberacy,

You have a very well-sequenced text with a clear topic sentence, supporting ideas, and concluding sentence. Just try to expand some of the ideas you mentioned in the body of your paragraph to make it even richer. Pay attention to some language structures, mainly the verbs. I'm sure this will soon be a masterpiece!

Write the second version of your text just below the first. Click on "edit" and then "save".

vt - wrong verb tense

vf - wrong verb form

sp- spelling

wf - wrong word form

^ - something missing