Beauty

Red Wine

This product has been considered as the drink of the Gods for the past centuries.

It is made from several different types of grape, such as: Cabernet Sauvignon, Carmenere, Malbec, Zinfandel, Tempranillo, Chardonnay and so on. Its color is beautiful and it reminds the color of blood.

It has many benefits for a healthy life. It decreases the chances of a heart attack, and improves good cholesterol If you drink one or two glasses a day, but if you drink a lot, you could get drunk. It's necessary to put the bottle for a few minutes in the fridge to make it taste good. The better sidedishes to accompany wine are bread and cheese. At my home, my wife and I have the habit to drink just one glass a day, but on Friday Night when we go out to have dinner at a restaurant, we drink more than one glass. The older the red wine, the better!

Paragraph Unit 1

Eduardo is my first grandson. I have taken him I gave him birth in ^ delivery room at Hospital Brasília. He is 6 years old, he is tall and thin because he doesn't like to eat. He looks like his father (my second son). He likes swimming, riding a bicycle, playing soccer and watching programs of BEN 10. He has been studying at a Canadian school called MAPLE BEAR  and sometimes we have got (vf)  ^speaking (vf) something in English. Every Saturday he goes to my house and so we have time to do many things ^ as to go to ^ movies, to  ^ club, to ^ playground, to ^ restaurant and to have ^ snack and so on. He is very smart and naughty playful.  Everybody says he is really a people person. I totally agree totally with the proverb that says " ^ Grandson is a son with sugar".

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